holy shit thats a great poem, good job i love it sooooo much lolz. 5/5 keep at it!
~*lindz*~

OOOO sweetie I love this sooo much! Well sorry it's been so long. See me and my sis got into a lot of trouble and I'm grounded from the computer...probably till July sometime. Yea it sucks. WOW! Well wat is your aol email?? i mite be able to add you to my msn cause sometimes you can add aol ppl. but g2g so ttyl girly! i'll miss you!
love you always,
Haily
xoxoxoxoxoxo

Omg, this was so sad but it was beautifully written! :( Keep up all the good work though!!

wow that was such a sad poem! It was very well written and you showed a lot of emotion, keep up ur writing cuz ur very talented! 5

Holy crap !
thats is like one of my fave poems off here .. Its really awesome. alot of emotion in it ....... its sad but really good ....
I'm commenting for the post you made in the forum so may you plz comment on some of my poems .. thank you
Keep writtin
April `

aww...don't worry, you're not the only one :)

very well written, keep it up!

You are so not alone, I'm with you!!! I relate to this one 100 %....One of the best poems ever, keep up the grest work....Very emotional and heartbreaking!!!

*Hugs Sabrina*

I like about half of this poem. All of it is good but only about half of it reached me. I don't know why. Good job though. kilman = David B. 5/5 Never Give Up

5/5/ no doubs great poem i really liked i can relate in a way

thanks everyone. I appreciate it. xxx

It's unbelievable how you magage to maintane the rhyme throughout the poem so well. I think it's good you can organise your writing so well, but I would like to see how you write without being so faithful to rhyming

very depressing poem...i love the repetition!! 5/5!

wow!!! hats off thatz one of the best i have ever read so well written n said... i really admire your talent.lol. Take care
nina