ur kiddin right... its better than good can get!!

i could really feel the emotion that you were writing about...dont say its "no good"...its how you feel and its honest, thats the important part. :) good job

Wow, i can really really relate to this!! of course it's good! i loved this one and really enjoyed it!! keep up the Way awesome job!!! 5/5

aww hope your ok!! this poem is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!! 5/5 I love it! Keep it up you have a gift!
*BECKY*

xxx ~thanks~ xxx

aw....that is so sad....breakups are always hard....goo dluck w/ everything 5/5

wow that was beautiful! i know the way u feel believe me if uve ever read my stuff u would know i feel ur pain! great job! 5!

that wasn't bad that wasn't good that was great! i'm always going to be a big fan of your poems there is so much feeling in them i can never get mine to sound like that! your great!