Comments : Hurt

  • 19 years ago

    by twigchick

    hey i just wanted to let you kno that i thought yur poam was very touching,really,you really have a talent for expressing your feelings.

  • 19 years ago

    by --SlIpPin_AwAy--

    The wind blows dust
    From the playground to my eyes
    Drying the tears
    That streak across the skies
    I forgot what a smile
    Truly felt like

    wow. that is brilliant. awesome writing. i really love this. <3

  • 19 years ago

    by freeatlast

    thank you all so much!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by lisa

    this is a very good poem..i can relate to it.

  • 19 years ago

    by freeatlast

    thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by OnceBroken

    Love the poem :-)