by Johnny Marlin Jun 29, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
Jason you know |
very thoughtful! i like it! great poem! 25/5! |
He slept with your girl? Psht, I'd sock him one. That's just morally wrong. Moving to Trexas, ay? Why not pick me up! haha, I hate it here anyways. lol |
by Richard
he cheated onn ur frienship what a bastard lol 5/5 good write |
by Jason Meres
Quite nearly flawless poetically, very well done. |
I'm sorry if this happened to you. Short poem, but you have really great flow in your poetry. You are a true talent once again and I hope you submit more of your work. If you do e-mail me @ taintedbutterfly18@yahoo.com Not too common I run into real good stuff on here anymore :) |