Very well written poem with great flow. Sucks to have a friend like that but you know in the end they were never a true friend! Good job writing this one! Take Care! Brooke~

wow, I really loved this one. You're
a great poet. really talented. keep
it up. take care, marjan

wow!! i love this writing.. it's just like mine!! lol-seriously! lol.. no, but the flow was so good and your rhymes fit perfectly!! awesome job! it was so morbid though! hopefully that is not about you!! you got a 5 (5/5)
peace,
Abcede

wow..that was mean...but i guess he deserves it. (wait..is this real?)

Good job on the rhyming parts. :~)

Awesome poem . It flowed really well . I liked it . I hope it isn't true . If so what a mean friend you had !! grrrrr. lol
but yes great job . 5/5
April`

i felt a bit of agressive but still at the same time some unending care...or maybe thats just my thoughts i dunno thats gotta hurt to be betrayed like that.....5/5

i added you to ma fav's.....please vote on mine too :) kk

I'm sorry if this happened to you. Short poem, but you have really great flow in your poetry. You are a true talent once again and I hope you submit more of your work. If you do e-mail me @ taintedbutterfly18@yahoo.com Not too common I run into real good stuff on here anymore :)

Quite nearly flawless poetically, very well done.

he cheated onn ur frienship what a bastard lol 5/5 good write

He slept with your girl? Psht, I'd sock him one. That's just morally wrong. Moving to Trexas, ay? Why not pick me up! haha, I hate it here anyways. lol

very thoughtful! i like it! great poem! 25/5!