Exposed

by undying blusher   Jun 29, 2005


Specks of golden brown
Surrounded by dark green
Spread in glorious streams
Empty hole through the core
Around the white
Tiny red veins exposed
In their ugliness
Exhaustion shown
Lashes curved upward
Only a few stick together
Another worn out day
Without being told...
Coming to the point
Where nothing's left to say
Another wasted day
That's all it is...
Nothing more

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  • 18 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    This poem seems to be left to interpretation... i like that..... there are so many thigs/people that could be expressed through this poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Wow not many people would take the time to brake apart something so ordinary. Very original. 5/5

    And I agree that an individual life should have a meaning...but not life itself.Someone should believe in something, but people should not stress about the WHY??? questions that no one has an answer for.

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    very very very good i loved it.. i like the way you described everything..5/5

    take care
    much love
    shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    that would be correct, Carmen. thank you.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    this is a poem about eyes, isnt it? very original. for that, 5/5 great job

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