for some reason it feels gentle to me...i don't know, but I like it a lot. Lovely poem :)

xxx

another great poem

Awesome poem, I love the words you use, they are out of the ordinary and have obviously been chosen carefully. Your flow is impressive, and they rhythm, rhyming and timing is all excellent. The rhyming scheme you have chosen is also very hard to do and I liked how there were no forced rhymes. The last line linking up to the first rounds it off nicely and gives a good finish. Lovely work :)

I like this one
its really good

Wow! that was great!....i think we were commenting e/o back and forth haha....this ones just a little but later hahaha...but yeah this poem is sooo good and you have amazing talent!...and btw your rhyming skills are better than mine hahaha....comment back!?