wow. this is really good and it teaches a lesson...did this really happen to anybody you know? or did you just think of it. either way its really good. keep up the great work. if ya ever need to talk well I'm here as always, hugs-hayley

this is a great poem ... u r a really great writer!! ~n~ this teaches a really good lesson ... i can realate to this .. sort of .. i kno a gurl who alwayz spreads rumorz ~n~ if u get in her bad side she'll ruin ur lyf but she hasnt gotten raped .. (yet) -> LOL ... but n e way i think that this is ~n~ awsome poem!! (5) keep up the great work! <3
xoxo
-Viv

very good...flowed pretty nicley nd the rhym scheme was good too....i liked the message! 5/5

btw....i absolutley love your pic in your lookup!! its so true

that is really good, it has a really great message...i liked it a lot! it reminded me of a girl i know, and something similar happened to her...

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hi!
ur poem was good-it gave a really strong message and the story was told well, although sometimes the rhymes didn't flow

great work though!

Awesome poem . It is so good , It flowed really well. And it also teaches a great lesson .loved it 5/5
April`

this is an amazing poem. the rhythm really makes it more affective and it sends out an important message. well done!

Loved it!! you really got some talent!! keep it up! 5/5

aw that is sad .but your a great writer keep it up ..crissie

This poem is so true! Such a great write! 5/5