:P thank you sunny!

wow... this is so original!!!! i absolutely love it!!! you're extremely talented. keep it up!
Ariane
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great job hun! hey look i'm finally back! and i get to read your new work! yay! hope things were god while i was gone! well gotsta go, more poems to read!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Uhh i'm back for a bit. Sorry i have been away for so long; and had no time to comment on any of your stuff. I really miss reading your stuff but omg, i'm back off to Aussie in less than a week for another netball tournament, god i'm so stuffed :D. Anyway hun i'll try and read some more and vote/comment in the next few days before i'm off again.

Remember you're always in my heart <3.
I Luvvooo tremendously.

- Kals.

i like this. great flow and style. amazing job!

5.5

love & hugs

this is really clever, i like it, it almost reminds me of my "coffe kryptonite" poem, haha, great work. thanx for commenting on mine. bye bye
Ben

wow.. that is really good.. your read smart... such big words..

really* haha... 5/5 anyways..

Lol i read that post..nice poem...esp. since its about bread...can u mayb chek out my stuff?
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