Wow, Guilt has so much depth and soul. It creates quite a image in your mind that you can't get rid of, even if you tryed. (Not saying i want too, haha.) That poem was very much worthwhile. I loved reading it, and i hope to read all of your work.

-Jennifer. (mistressxsork)

Sounds kind of like a song. It may appeal to the masses, but it doesn't really appeal to me. The last line I think made it less--what should i say--potent. I thin kit is because the last line sounded kind of generic. The rest of the poem is good though.