I really like it but "you" and "blue' it's too commonly used...I think you could do better! You have a talent and I don't think you should belittle it by using commonplace rhymes! 5/5 though! I did like this poem!

Ahhhh sweet poem !!!! I liked it.
Thanks for commenting on my poems, i really appreciate it.
XxX Charli XxX ~*~