wow... im speechless... beautiful!!! amazing!!!! wow... brilliantly written. keep it up!
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wow that was really good

Ugh. Whats the low score. I thought it was wonderful... 5/5

Love
Heather.

I love this poem I though you did a really good job on it . Your choice of words was great . Beautiful poem just awesome .
April

I thoroughly enjoyed reading that poem! The choice of words was excellent. I cannot think of any flaws with it. Keep up the good work!

dude!! sooo good! i don't know why it is rated so low!! i'm glad u referenced lucifer's name! i saw it on a Xena episode (xena, so stupid, right? - long time ago) and i never heard anyone use his name in context until you just did!! AWESOME JOB! i love it! oh.. 5/5! DEFINATELY
love always,
Abcede

great use of words i really like this type of genre so i enjoyed 5/5

OMG that was excellent! It deserves a much higher rating than this. I will try to boost it up for you. Great job. xxx

Beautiful rhyming. It didn't seem forced at all. I really loved this poem. You are a wonderful poet. Great job!

WONDERFUL!

very good writing david.I give it a 5

I have to admit, I am impressed. I don't get impressed easy. Take care. 5/5

hi! thanks for checking out my poem! it really meant a lot to me.. yes I'm miss vicious.. I'm so surprised that you knew who I was =D I really liked this poem.. I voted a 5 on it! great work so keep it up.. hugs

a very well written deep dark poem that would be hailed by ozzie 5/5

word choice is fantastic, really great poem! 5/5

love your poem have a 5

good

wow! very creative! i loved your rhyme and structure! well done your very talented!
>>5/5<<
*bec* xXx

Very good. 5/5. I really Enjoyed this One. It Flowed Very nicely. Congrats.

amazing...it's everything i would look for in a good poem. Great job and dont stop writing!