beautifully written! i loved it! you flowed nicely and did a really well job of expressing your emotions! i loved it!! 5/5

hey i really like u poem its is really cool. I like sad depressioniong things and peoms.

Dark, but I like it. Great flow to it as well. Keep up the great work.

Amazing poem, you have real talent, keep up the good work

Speechless again.....Don't know what to say...It was really beutiful and perfectly written...L-O-V-E it

*Hugs Sabrina*

absolutely incredible. I enjoyed reading this poem. great job.
take care,
marjan

so much darkness i like this one it makes me think of fear

Hey... lovin ur poetry... keep it up... pimpprincess_87@yahoo.com