Comments : One drink too many

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    great message. awesome poem. amazing work! =)

    5.5

    love and hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    i know personally what drinking can do to a family, friends and the one person that actually does the drinking. the effect is like ripples in a water. i know too much about what this poem is like, and i'm sorry if you do too. best of wishes! great poem!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~