by «-Pale-Petals-» Jun 29, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Her eyes were gems, |
by Krete
The developmental pain in this piece is just so vivid and growing that I love it. |
by EpithetPoet
A very intriguing poem. Starts off sweet and gentle, then goes off into depression. Nicely made. |
by Mj
deep. really good poem. xox |
its good,but u need to edit the ending. |