To My father

by Chad   Jun 29, 2005


Took me in when no one else would.
Guided me through life the best he could.
When things looked like they could get no worse.
Even with his horrible curse.
He would not give up with out a fight.
So I think he has every right.
When I would fall he would be there.
So full of love and care.
He tells me that I can do anything I want to.
Coming from him I know it to be true.
He will always stand by me.
Even if we do not agree.
He cant see, but he helps me with whatever he can.
He is very levelheaded and a very strongman.
When he is mad you can still see the love he has for me.
All of the things he wants me to be.
Sometimes I am unfair.
But I still know that he does care.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    That was a veru nice tribute to your dad mate. He seems like one of those people that your never forget when you meet him and he seems to be very dear and close to you. It is a great blessing to have a parent that will love you no matter what, treasure that.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awww, Did you make this for your dad? Becasue if you did, It's so nice!! Well done !

    natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Hareem

    Super Duper excellent!
    As I read it, I could feel it coming from my own heart. Great write sure to catch almost everyone's praise.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    Very very touching... another great poem. Keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Megadrive

    I really like this poem... though I cant really relate... it is a well written poem. Advice would be to put some commas in there to... give your poem a rhyme, makes the reader get into it, and you can also make different words more powerful and stand out more. Here is an example of what I mean.
    Original

    Took me in when no one else would.
    Guided me through life the best he could.

    Edited Version

    Took me in, when no one else would.
    Guided me through life, the best he could.

    But there is not a huge difference because yours are already pretty well written so… that’s good:) lol Good job!

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