Great poem ...it looks like you have a lot of respect for your dad...wish i could say the same

Touching poem hon, great job

Beautiful poem...nice to see a poem of love and respect for a parent instead of hatred or something...sad. Keep writing!

xxx

aww thats sooo sweet. usually guys write about hating their parents but i really really like this one. 5/5!

wow, this is so brilliant chad. you're
so talented. my dad is so wonderful
too. take care, marjan

Wow that is such a cute poem~! I can totally relate to it! 5

awesome

Good poem! Nice flow! =D

wow. im so glad you have a father like that. my father passed away. it is such a sweet poem and i love your style
5/5
love paulette

very nice tribute to your dad...

That was beautiful man. I really am glad that there are kids who appreciate their parents. There are so many you just hate their parents and wished the worst for them. This is a well written poem.

hey great poem! its really touching
courtie

taht felt like u were talking about a step dad and that is exactly how i felt. it sounded in some parts like u were trying to hard to rhyme but it still sounded great. 5/5

I absolutley LOVED this poem. I think it was so well written and very sweet. Your so talented, keep up the amazing work. ღ

it was really moving, i enjoyed it and you seriously ahve an amazing talent:)

his is gsoooo good i think i going to cry

AMAZING! i loved it.

wow i liked this one too...great job....5/5 luv yas mwah

-kayla-

That is a really wonderful poem. I'm glad you have such a strong relationship with your father. Keep up the good work. Take care.

Ah, what I would give for a father that strong. My father..*Shakes head* I don't want to get into it. Let's just say we don't get along and leave it at that... I would love to meet yours though. The way you portray him reminds me of a solider.......

Love,
DarkSuicide