I didnt think the flow matched up that well and words sounded forced but i gave it a 5 because i am envious. i wish i can write about a dad like that.

I really like this poem... though I cant really relate... it is a well written poem. Advice would be to put some commas in there to... give your poem a rhyme, makes the reader get into it, and you can also make different words more powerful and stand out more. Here is an example of what I mean.
Original

Took me in when no one else would.
Guided me through life the best he could.

Edited Version

Took me in, when no one else would.
Guided me through life, the best he could.

But there is not a huge difference because yours are already pretty well written so… that’s good:) lol Good job!

Very very touching... another great poem. Keep writing

Super Duper excellent!
As I read it, I could feel it coming from my own heart. Great write sure to catch almost everyone's praise.

Awww, Did you make this for your dad? Becasue if you did, It's so nice!! Well done !

natz x0x

That was a veru nice tribute to your dad mate. He seems like one of those people that your never forget when you meet him and he seems to be very dear and close to you. It is a great blessing to have a parent that will love you no matter what, treasure that.

-Tainted Mikochan