by Andrea Jun 30, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Under the bridge lies a broken child. |
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by Bridgette
Wow this is really good.. I Love the rhyme scheme that you used and the way that you ended it with a question.. very creative. You did a great job on this.. I loved it! |
by *~Emma~*
I'm am really starting to enjoy reading your poems...you have such talent! and your only 16? you've come far! another awsum poem |
by LindaPham
great poem you express the feelings very well..... it's a nice poem i liked it |
by Broke&Lost
Great Poem. I don't think she should die. In many poems the people just die and some freak miracle should keep them all alive. So let some freak miracle happen to her and let her live. |