GRRRR!! i want to know wut happens!!! >< AHHHHHHHHHHH!!! it's so good tho. and thank you so much for your comment... it really means alot, just to know that i do have friends that care

great poem as always!!
5/5
Truley,
-Kit

WOW! xtalking sperm clap and roar in the crowdx !!!! woo!! i love this poem so friggin much! it's amazing! really great! ...hmm...what should i think should happen to the girl...i think that by some strange way she'll live even though she TRIES to kill herself! well there's my input! well keep it up! the hairy monkey nuts love you so much!

-BIG HAIRY MONKEY NUTS!

Love ya, Taylor

Wow...to kill...or not to kill....hmm...*weighs with hands* Which sounds more fun? As a newly bitten vampire, I'd have to say TO KILL, but as a leader of the Meatball Hoagie Club..>I'd have to say NOT TO KILL! So, this one puzzles me, lol!!!!!!

Miss ya mah darling Shaggers!!!!!!! I've been gone so long, and I continue to be gone!
I'm soo sorry...

LOVE TO THE MEATBALL HOAGIE IN YOU!!

~Sierra

___Meatball Hoagie#2___

absolutly stunning poem, andrea you have such a way with words its not even funny! gurl, i love you and i hope your doing good! come read my poems when you get the chance! i miss you! xoxoxxoxoxooxoxo

Great poem Andrea! It was so great. A great description and much emotion. I loved it! Can't wait to find out what happens to the girl. Love you! <3

~Krissy

*hugs*

Amazing poem, been looking forward to another master piece from you, well done it was fantastic everything clicked into place and the flow was perfect.. keep up the great work and well done

take care

katie!

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wow...im speechless... you're so incredibly talented. keep up the amazing work!!!
-xXx-

i hope she doesn't die it wouldn't be fair... well written poem though it's very scary!

this was a wonderful poem
great job

Wow. This is the best poem I have read in a long time on this site. It took my breath away by it's sadness. 5/5.

absolutely wonderful, I really enjoyed this poem, and I liked the way you ended it with a question. Maybe there will be a sequel? Either way excellent. Take care

I really thought your poem was amazing, and beautifully written. The one thing you need to decide, is if someone, anyone, loves or cares about her. If someone does, I think they should help her to save her own life, but if no one comes along...you know the rest. Then again, I like the way the poem is now, left hanging.

Megan

another well written dark poem 5

I'm goin to go with pro-life on this one.
ill give my opinion on the poem when i have more time, till then stay curious
-Allen

well if you do decide she lives than you would have to have someone realize the hurt shes been through and be with her every step of the way to show her that someone does care. then it will show how people need others to survive and that this girl was lucky enough to get just that near her almost end.

if you decide that she should die, then it should show how society cares to much about there busy days to stop and realize the help she needs. the world lately seems to revolve around money and what they are going to buy next or what they are going to spend thier money on, it seems like people seem to care more about themself than others. so maybe if she dies it can be a wake up call to those who would have just passed her by, a wake up call to those who would have figured "O someone else can deal with her" the message to this poem is that you can make a difference so stop letting those chance pass you by!

~but thats just my opinion, and maybe you didn't want my answer to this. you made a wonderful poem and it is a delight to see new ones from you! this poem once you decide her fate can sure show a lot of meaning and a strong message! tell me once you decide so i can read to see what you thought was the best finish for her!~

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Great Poem. I don't think she should die. In many poems the people just die and some freak miracle should keep them all alive. So let some freak miracle happen to her and let her live.
Jenn.

great poem you express the feelings very well..... it's a nice poem i liked it
5/5

I'm am really starting to enjoy reading your poems...you have such talent! and your only 16? you've come far! another awsum poem
luv em

Wow this is really good.. I Love the rhyme scheme that you used and the way that you ended it with a question.. very creative. You did a great job on this.. I loved it!

Very Good