by steviee Jun 30, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
This pain the regret the sorrow and despair.. The hurt that u have caused is killing me.. Inside to out the words that u say are too hard to live with, I've known you for my life you were my best friend.. The pain you put me through just last year, still hurts and is ripping my soul apart strip by strip piece by piece.. I guess love is really one big cause of death.. The hurt is killing me still to this very day this absolute moment you cross my mind and it kills me even faster... The thought of killing my self had already begun.. slit my throat or my wrist, hang my self or maybe get creative with a twist.. but in the end it cant hurt like this! |
by Lovemylove
Really good, but kinda sad, and depressing but I like it alot, thanks for commenting on my poem, again good job. |
by Justin
I think that was really good, I gave it a 5/5 because i can relate to that poem alot and I think that you are a very good poet and just keep up the good work! |