In this poem I am writing about no one in particular it is just about a finding my true love and remember true love has its flaws but you must look beyond the flaws of the person you love.

hey Bridgette, well i liked your way of thinking cause i have somehow got that same kind of thoughts lately! :)

omg! I liked this alot! 5/5

nice one... urs better than mine ^^ and this poem should be based on how u feel... anyway u should try to write more.. u r good

Bridgette, its good to know someone else feels like that! I really loved your poem! You think a lot like I do. I know how you feel when it seems like no matter what you do you will never find true love, trust me I've had those nights when I just stayed up sobbing because of emptiness. You will find someone though don't worry. They will see your understanding of love and that will be a big help. Good Job!

Thanks guys u dont know how much this means to me and I hope my poems inspire everyone in a certain way>>>I love u alll

This is a very grand poem! i think everybody feels that way, when they feel like nobody notices them, and nobody cares. good job :)

wow I feel the same way. all I want is love, and true love not lustful love because I have no Hormone controled heart but a heart that has been broken time and time again by those who mistake lust for love and hook ups for relationships. I have a heart that is desprete for repair and a dream desprete to be fullfilled. I just want to fall in love and not get hurt. I want to make is last and break this curse. I dont want to feel depressed ever again. I just want to hold her close until the end. yes I tend to overuse that staza right there but it pretty much sums up my dream of love, and yea I can realate to your poem. I loved it. 5/5

i love this one... especially the last part of it... thats how i feel about my boyfriend.

I just read your poem and I can say with no doubt is great. Just like dreams words can be so chaotic and meaningful at the same time. this is the case, I felt as I was reading it how I've been through that dark place so many times, longing for the lost love or any love, for what matters. 5/5!!!!!