Knife In The Back

by Chris   Jun 30, 2005


It's hard to walk
with this knife in my back
Something that was great
no longer in tact

You say I'm jealous
I laugh at the thought
Thought we were best friends
but i guess not

The times you've hurt me
I can barely keep track
So, give me a knife
to plant in your back

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  • 19 years ago

    by Courtney

    that ones kool...i wish i could send it to lyndy..but i dont have her e-mail..lol

    love, courtney

  • 19 years ago

    by Darien

    pretty good poem man.. yeaa..
    a little work and this will be a really good piece.. good idea.. and structure

  • 19 years ago

    by Arora

    short meaningful and to the point -- all that needs to be said. <3 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Straight to the point. I like it. Great rhythm. sounds like sweet revenge...nice.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ahh Lydia took my words..Short and sweet.,,First more then anything I'd like to say I'm so sorry your best friend did you wrong like that! That's so unfair! I'm an emotional person and get hurt easily so if anyone, I really really know how you feel... I think though that being mad will only make them happier..Yet you have a right to be..Touch situation and I hope you pull through!
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

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