god. this is so great,and so true for so many. god.. i dont know what that entry was about.. but god it pissed me off so much. i don tknow what brought that lash out at you or me or rachel whover. but.. BLAH. anywyas good write, talk to ya later

Good - Short and sweet!

Thanks for your comment on mine - Keep writing well....

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-Lyd

Ahh Lydia took my words..Short and sweet.,,First more then anything I'd like to say I'm so sorry your best friend did you wrong like that! That's so unfair! I'm an emotional person and get hurt easily so if anyone, I really really know how you feel... I think though that being mad will only make them happier..Yet you have a right to be..Touch situation and I hope you pull through!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

Straight to the point. I like it. Great rhythm. sounds like sweet revenge...nice.

xxx

short meaningful and to the point -- all that needs to be said. <3 5/5

pretty good poem man.. yeaa..
a little work and this will be a really good piece.. good idea.. and structure

that ones kool...i wish i could send it to lyndy..but i dont have her e-mail..lol

love, courtney