"because hate in people
blind their sight"
Could be more affective as,
Because the hate in people
Blinded their sight
i think thats what you meant anyway. i like the imagry in the poem and i like it all the way until the end. i dont like the ending. "damn fools" just seems to bring the poem down to a level undesired. throughout the poem you seem to have a godly air to it, if you make the end a bit more sophisitcated this would be an excellent poem.
~*Freak*~

WHOOP! Lucky number 100 right! nice poem!

i love it!

5.5

love and hugs

I loved the way you started it off.. Very nicely written 5/5 none to less.. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

i see you did well but
no one can judge
so dont worry
your good
(you should check me out)
i need someone to tell me if my poems are ok

it's not bad at all i think it was beautifully written

Wow that was an interesting poem! 5

great poem sis

5.0

kool poem enjoyed it alot

Very good poem. ^^ I like the meaning behind it.. Very good job.. Keep it up.. Take Care!

Angel~

It's not bad at all...infact it's amazing...and are you a gothic?

Wow that poem explains exactly how i feel i love all of your poems!
-pip

Beautiful
People can be cruel cant they
5/5
Your writing is beyond perfection =)

A sad story with such beautiful descriptions! The first stanza was my favourite as I really liked the imagery.
Good write =)
5/5

This has to be one of my top favorites on here. i love it, it's very well done. it also tells a true story, people judge to easily and hate what they dont understand