Comments : Daddys little girl

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    whats with the numbers. words are a lot more affective. some of your lines didn't make sense. try to correct those and get rid of the numbers and you have yourself a great poem.
    ~*Freak*~

  • 19 years ago

    by **baby_girl**

    that is gr8 babe say hey 2 verity 4 me u write well gd stuff love ya x-x-x-x

  • 19 years ago

    by yhn17

    When a great artist writes a poem, i dont believe he/she is trying to rythm or make it sound amazing...just writing what comes from the heart...rather then connecting the pen to the page, a great artist connects their heart to words...so it doesnt matter if you have mistakes or not...
    great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by samantha

    I know how you feel i dont even know my father and im almost 18. so keep your head up and someday he'll find you!