At first, it made me smile...then it became sad...alas, that's what happens in real life; you don't always get that happy ending...often you don't actually.... *sigh*

Beautifully written poem.

xxx

It's a hard story to tell, but you did it with ease! Amazing write! 5/5!

That was beautifully written. There is a lot of emotion in it. I'm sorry things didn't work out the way you wanted them to, but I guess that's just the way it goes sometimes. Keep up the good work and take care.

Really nice, i enjoyed reading it:)

Ana*