Do you see ?

by Areyoucrazy   Jun 30, 2005


Hey mommy
why are you this way to me ?
calling me names calling me down
telling me I'm not respectful
yelling, screaming I don't know why
I try to do everything right
I'm like your little maid
I do everything for you
for these kids
Your so hurtful to me
do you realize what I do for you ?
I don't think you do
I could clean the whole house
top to bottom
and all you will say is "Its not clean enough"
I work my ass off your you to make you happy
so when you come home
You don't yell at me , call me names ,put me down
I'm your kid not your maid
can't you see all my pain ?
you don't even bother to ask me about my day ,how I'm doing ,
nothing ,but criticism comes from your mouth
I wish you could be a little nicer
hug me more often
tell me you cared
tell me you see what I do for you
tell me you love me,just little more
sit down and talk to me just a little more
I cry ..you do not hear?? ..
I scream you do not care??
You slam doors in my face
You walk away when you do not want
to her what I have to say
Do you ever wonder what I go through in a day ?
I watch these kids
I clean, I cook
I do everything your way ...
I'm so beat
Do you have your own little book ?
I can't wait until I'm out of your house
I will be happy
I won't have to worry about you coming home and yelling
one day you will see What I do for you
Would you mind and stop being a b tch ?
but it will be to late
because those
little words of encouragement mean nothing today

*This is a poem bout my mom and what i do for her but I don't think she sees it *April

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  • 19 years ago

    by x~broken~angel~x

    aaaw! great poem! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Creative idea and so sad and full of true emotions! I would re-read the poem there is quite a few errors. Other than that an amazing job~! Take Care! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by Marjan

    wow, I loved this one.
    you really write so beautifully.
    love you,
    marjan

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow, great poem... 5/5 for this one... keep it up.. please check out my poem "My dad: dead and gone forever" it would mean so much to me... hugs!