wow, great poem... 5/5 for this one... keep it up.. please check out my poem "My dad: dead and gone forever" it would mean so much to me... hugs!

wow, I loved this one.
you really write so beautifully.
love you,
marjan

Creative idea and so sad and full of true emotions! I would re-read the poem there is quite a few errors. Other than that an amazing job~! Take Care! Brooke

aaaw! great poem! xxx