Please comment on my poem. I want to know if it's good or not and the only way I'll know is if you're completely honest with me. Thank You.

really liked your poem
i liked how you expressed yourself
great poem!

thanks for the comment on my poem...
i loved yours 5/5 keep it up...
i can relate with you/your writing alot!
great job
much love,
Jamie

Very nice...I think you could do more with it, but you've got definite potential. :)

I like this part the most:

"Then you lose the lying love
You dont leave but she does
You want to feel the touch
The hands are coarse
Everything just gets worse"

xxx

Very good...I can relate. 5/5

wow thats really good..i cant get over how good of a writer you are lol...or you lol..

much love to ya

Aaron, you surely know how to put feelings into poems!!! The sun will shine eventually!!

Great poem. Things do get worst... Most of the time. Well they do for me lol. Well written, it's amazing. *hugs*

~Jessica

I believe everything gets worse for some reason...or they do acutally get worse, but just for a while.acutally it gets worse more than it gets good. but idk, tha's just my thoughts not that. but good poem. i lk it cuz it was true 5/5

This is a lovely poem
5/5
its different & intense
i liked readin it
love
amy