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by John123 Jun 30, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Something in the sky catches my eye. A glimmering hope passes me by. I reach out to the bounds of my bindings. And still am kept from claiming my findings. Gravity pulls me down further than where I started. Six feet from where I and the faithful ground parted. From my hole, each revelation of damnation is a slap in the face. I realize that always at my slowest pace comes the end of the race. I reach out for the strand of crimson velvet that will set me free. But at that point I trip and fall, then I raise my eyes to see that it was me who made me fall and my own gravity.
by Victoria Rainey
Good job.. very espressive!! Im deaf and I saw one of comment, from michele, but are you deaf?
by kate
wow grat excelant keep it up.
by Danielle
This is an interesting piece. I enjoyed reading it. I hope you post more poems like this one. Best wishes