OMG that was great awesome and beautiful
i love how you started it by Ahmed it shows how you feel
and i also loved the ending!!
btw my bf's name is Ahmed too :D :D
I wrote You Mean The World For Him*its about Him*
anyway great poem Sarah
Keep Going
Good Luck
Nema
XoXoXoX

"wow",... that was the first word that opened my mouth when i read your poem it was very nice and touching............keep the work ......u r a gr8 writer

wow i really enjoyed your poem:) Keep rocking and check some of mine out some time:)
Love Koo \m/(><)\m/

Thank you! xxx

great poem the last part kinda sounded like a quote i wrote

"if the only place we're together
are in my dreams,
then i'd sleep forever."

I think this is a very good poem its really good keep writing.

Omg! I love that! That was so awesome!

Hey, I feel you on this poem. It was really beautiful.

LUVda'POEMrealSWEEThope4da'BEST

always,

~*bbygrlovesdiamonds*~

I LOVE THAT POEM THATS HOW I FEEL ABOUT MY EX!!!

this is an **AWESOME** poem!! i loved every word of it.. and i really felt that way over a guy.. but it seemed to fade, your love for this guy must be flying..you really have a great talent keep it up

very, very good... i loved it 5-5