brilliant poem, really angry, interesting rhyming scheme, clever form, well done.. i enjoyed it very much and though it is something often written about you did well in portraying the feelings and emotions you feel, lots of people can relate

well done
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Although some words were slang, using the " ' " to replace the full word, it was still good. The structure was very nice and the flow was good. Your rhyming was very good too. ♥