omgosh..that was sooo sad. i have tears in my eyes. 5/5!!!

That really was a beautiful dedication to your mother. I am very sorry anyone would have to go through that. Take care.

man dis was reali reali good. very tunching,emotional, and deep. i reali loved it.
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wow very touching. i loved it ur very good keep up the good wrk

OMG ! that poem gave me tears in my eye ! . I loved it ... I'ts so sad ..and so good . Had so much emotion .this poem ade me think of myself for a seccond .....great job once again
April~

WOW! a-a-a-mazing! this is definitely one of the best i have read! the emotion is so real and it feels like i'm going through it all as i read. i really hate to know that this has happened but i know it has and it makes me mad. but this poem is excellent...flawless...i love it.

5.5

love and hugs

*tear* mucho *tear* omg I got *tears* 5/5. Great job. kilman = David B.

an absolutely brialliant, beautiful, and moving poem. Please, please, please read my poem "under her smile"....it's very much like this...this poem meant so much to me because it reminded me of my parent's relationship. A great write...keep this work coming.

--christa//no motiv?

I cant even imagin what it would be like to lose my mother ...she is truely my best friend...great write ..it made me think of what i have

OMG....that is so sad. If it happened then I am truly sorry. great poem tho

~*~Christina~*~

This was so sad. Written beautifully though. Your so talented.

great poem. i loved. *wipes tear from eyes.* felt everyword you sad strong meaning strong poem 5/5.

What a lovely heartfelt poem. congratulations on writing it.

Tears are welling up in my eyes...truly touching poem...you can reach so many people with this poem, and amazingly done, again.

xxx

Did this really happen it was a beautiful poem with such wormth and caring

This poem is so heartfelt and sad. I cried it was so good! Its a shame that innocent people die from others violent rage. Your a great and true poet. 5/5

-Brittany