not bad. a few spelling mistakes though. lots of emotion displayed. keep writing, you can only improve.
~*Freak*~

Hey,
I am Janessa's Aunt. Well this poem is so close to how it realy is. I wrote about what happened to me, it is published on another site though. I will send a copy to Janessa in e-mail. It is a 2 parter.
~SaphiraJade~
~Melissa~