wow...that was really good...it had a good msg nd it was very inspiring! love it!! 5/5 |
by Brookeღ
Very good message in this poem! If only more people would realize how much friends care! Good job! Take Care! Brooke~ |
by Andrea
wow! i can relate to that. without my friends i prolly would be dead. after reading my poems i prolly dont seem like it cuz i always think positive now...even tho i do have poems about death and stuff....5/5! your an awesome writer!! |
by kyky
this is a really good poem i love it!!! keep it up!!! |
by Bridgette
Hey I can really relate to ur poems and I really wanted to comment on it cause I love to hear good positive things about my poems and I am sure you enjoy it too. Also I know how you feel when peopel steal ur poems and it sux cause I know I try really hard to make my poems mean somethin and for someone just to write down and call it their own makes me mad...Oh well keep writin cause ur talanted and u will always have talant and shine like a star. Love Bridgette |
by Chris Boesen
wow I really like your rhyme scheme. I like how you invert some lines to make them fit. and you have good rhythm too. yea well it sorta reminds me of how, whenever I get down and start talking crazy, how my friends are always there for me. great poem. |
by angie A
i liked who you wrote this poem |
very well written Erikka |
by erikka baby
Thanks so much guys. Your comments mean alot to me. |
great poem, it gave a good message. 5/5 keep writing. |
by Rebecca
I loved this poem. |
Beautiful. I hope you can save someone's life with this one. |
by ...:NiKi:...
I really enjoyed this poem, it has a good story to it, n is well written! 5/5 |
by Ashli
really good...i wish i could have read this when i was going through it, it would have helped alot! nice job! |
Good poem, keep up the work |
by Kia
i like this poem it shows that even though you feel like there is no way out that no one cares there is someone you just have to look for them... great job |
i think every person should read this poem, because it is such a great eye opener, and could change their future! thanks for commenting on my poem, this one is fantastic! |
That was an excellent poem 5 Very true and i understand what your saying! |
by EJ
WOW.. speechless over here... ummmm that was truely great and wonderful and idk it was just WOW... My best friend and I are like that so much!! i mean i have been the friend that needs the hug many times.. and she has also been that friend!! i mean we are always there for eachother.. and your poem it just really ..... idk how to say it!! but its like us so much and for you to describe it is just amazing.. once again WOW!! bye bye EJ |
by RaNdOmGaL
i love your poem it is really good!! but all the good times i try to think of just drift away because most of my mates have started to leave me and hate me, but i still have some mates and the mates i have got are very special to me, your poem is very inspirational!! |