this was a great poem!good job getting it to rhyme!..i have trouble with that sometimes..lol..keep up the good work!xoxo
<3JeSs

Wow, If your step mom diddint forgive you after this, she's crazy. Amzing, you are going to be a great poet one day, not that you arent now. but I see you getting published. Always follow your heart
Love Always
Allison

nicely written! very nice flow and rhythym! good word choice, and i hope your step mom forgives you! very beautiful poem, 5/5

hey hun i read your post and decided to come check you out, i'll read more when i have time but it's late tonight. ok this poem is really sweet and you did a beautiful job with it. i hope things with your step mom, things like this can be rough knowing that you dissapointed and hurt her feelings but she's also in trouble because she read your diary just hope things are better now. you did a wonderful job on the poem.

~PLP~ lil slam~ 5/5

if at the age of fifthteen you can write something with such expresion of apology, rythm and rhyme, then I am sure i will be impressed of your work when your thirty. Good job.

PS: welcome to this site

She's got 2 forgive you now !!! I've learnt it's best not 2 keep a diary cos i either always either get locked out of it, lose the keys, or leave it somewhere so every1 can read it....
Luckily most of the time i'm too forgetful 2 write in it... you should be proud that you're dedicated enough 2 remember 2 write in it !!!
Anyways really good poem !! Keep it up !!
Xxx Charli Xxx ~*~

hmmm... i wish i could tell my mom that i love her but ya know she tells me all the time that i was just an accident so that pretty much burns out the torch of love for her... anyways that was really sweet. I hope that she does feel better if she reads this. 5/5 youre awesome!
-Rachel

thats a nice poem. u put on the bulleten board that u were new and wanted ppl to rate. u dont need much help anymore do ya? all of your poems have awesome rateings good luck. hey help my poems get awesome rateings. :p