by writer girl Jul 1, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
My world is changing, |
gee im like a pesimist and ur like a obtimist. :p i dont comunicate my real life with my family and the only really really super allways understanding me friends i have r online.....yey me..good poem though. 5 |
by kiesha
Awesome job! That is very beautiful and wonderfully written. It's very true to life and I can definitely relate. Keep up the good work and take care. |
That's good. Revisit it in a few more year and you will find that your outlook will have chaged yet again. As we all get older our views on life change from our different experiences as we go through different phases. Good write. |
by allison
Good hidden messages. you have a way or wrritng that you don't plainly put things out for us to read, but you twist them in for us to think about. great! |
Really great poem you really decribed perfectly the transition from childhood into adulthood good on you!! |