this was a great poem!i really liked it!good job!
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<3JeSs

Really great poem you really decribed perfectly the transition from childhood into adulthood good on you!!
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Dave.....

Good hidden messages. you have a way or wrritng that you don't plainly put things out for us to read, but you twist them in for us to think about. great!
Love Always
Allison

That's good. Revisit it in a few more year and you will find that your outlook will have chaged yet again. As we all get older our views on life change from our different experiences as we go through different phases. Good write.

Regards,

Steve

Awesome job! That is very beautiful and wonderfully written. It's very true to life and I can definitely relate. Keep up the good work and take care.

gee im like a pesimist and ur like a obtimist. :p i dont comunicate my real life with my family and the only really really super allways understanding me friends i have r online.....yey me..good poem though. 5