hrm.... it was good. i like it. there's nothing like the beach and stars to make youre worries go away.

wow thats so excellent

Aww I Like It, Its Something Not Many People Think About, It Was Beautiful And I Enjoyed My Read 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

This was a delightful poem that evoked a lot of different emotions' I liked the relationship you drew betweeen the beach and the star gazing. This created a pleasingly vivid contrast between nature's terrestrial beauty and celestial beauty. I also liked the way you deftly wove the reminiscence of childhood into the poem.

I hope you will not be offended by a bit of honest, constructive criticism. This poem as well as your other that I have read contain a few technical errors. Small mistakes in grammar or spelling tend to disproportionately distract the reader of an otherwise fine poem.

I believe you are a very talented writer and I thank you for sharing your work here.

All the best to you. ---Lydia O.