beautiful poem I love it! Good luck with her! Always believe in love

Thanks a lot, its only my second poem EVER, so please leave feedback and vote everyone, thanks!

The poem wasnt based off someone, just made it up... :) I'm single here, and new to writing, and I have a habit of staying up late thinking of what to write, so good night, and thanks to everyone that voted and commented so late at night, or early morning.

wow, if this poem is about a made up person, that is also amazing. i have such a hard time making up things. i always have to have a certain topic. Keep up the good work mike!

Wow, i ent just saying this but i really enjoyed reading this poem, i loved it! it was really well thought out and made so much sense! thanks for rating mine and i know what yo said is true but its hard ya no? Keep writing and never stop! xxsammixx

Thanks everyone, I think this is the best I have ever written...and I dont think I can write them much better :P
But we will see...

whoever dropped me down from 5.0 to 4.9, you have some explaining to do... :)

This is a gorgeous poem! You made me want to cry!! Thanks for commenting on my poems! Please write some more!

great poem, i really liked it. altho this would fit better in the lasting love part instead of lost love..
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Wow... its nice to see a guy who actually feels... This was really good. And if theres really a girl to inspire that poem, keep it up...and she'd be a fool to leave you! ;)

it was a beautiful poem...... good job

wow this poem is really really good, i love the whole concept of this being a dream and realizing how much someone means to you.. i love it great job.

that was a good poem and i gave u a 5 it showed how much u really cared

it was real good. keep writting how you feel. she would be crazy not to love you back

ey wow grt poem it was awsome i realy liked it ...... and ur telented the 2nd poem and it was that grt u should keep writin coz ur grt writn poem :)
always smile
peaceeee

I do not understand this?

very good!! i wish i could make my poems rhymne! haha
i give it a 4.5!!

OMG that is soo sweet its really good i love it.

awww ... that is like the cutest thing ever.. i wish my ex b/f was like that.. :( that was a really good poem

AWESOME WORK! I realloy like your poem and I think that it reminds all of how we should cherish our special love however we can and what a tragedy it would be if we didn't have it. Once again, awesome work!
5/5