Thats a really good poem....its really deep....i would like to read more of ur poems if u have ne more......

A few spelling mistakes, but it happens to the best of us ^^ other wise you said what you wanted to say and the message was clear! good job and thanks for commenting my poem

It is not well written, but it is a beauty to my heart. 5/5

For all that its short, it really touched me. i hope things get better for you. 5/5

Hey thanks 4 commentin on mine i apreciate that and good poem i can relate soooooo much life sucks well much luck

Thats lovely and express ever so strong feelings am sorry. your poems are all set out simular and i love it. god bless * XXXX

I like this poem I went threw a very dark time to. I did a lot of bad stuff to myself. But then I found my boyfriend. He made me feel like a was special. But I still get my dark and sad times. Thanks for the comment.

Oh My Gracious that is sooo depressing! If you ever need someone to talk to just email me at LiLMuddyGurl23@yahoo.com. Hope your life gets better. Trust me it will, cause mine did.

Thnx for the comment ..and good poem really deep ..but ya i ended up having a miscarirriage ..thnx for the advice though ....

Wow this is good!! 5/5 its like my lofe too! lol thanks for the comment once again! keep up the good rite!

Hi, my name is Jennifer and I just want to say I am here for you and I liked all your poems

That poem reminds me of my life! I like it alot!!

Thats awesome!! I love it!!

Really good poem, I can totally relate! 5/5!