wow! i love the ending! it's so real! great job! 5/5.. oh.. can you please send me a message as to what different styles you would prefer me to write? i'm a new writier and i REALLY don't know any different styles! i mean, i've tried free verse.. but they sucked!! lol.. so.. could you do that? j/w!
love always,
Abcede

I really like your writing. Keep it up. 5/5

~Tormented~

very good I like it and well put
~stay~

Whoa...one of the best i've read here! I really, really liked it, I don't know what to say. It actually had an affect on me, and I love when poems can do that, so you've done really well :)
Xx Peace xX