by Rolo Jul 1, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Once upon a time, I knew of this face |
by mossgirl19
You really have a way with words and a real craft in telling a story in great rhyme. Back in 2005 I am just struggling to write a poem...but you had it in you already. A great talent indeed. |
by Lew97
I really like this poem! Great rhymes and rhythm. I love the last two stanzas. The angel leaves the fairytale yet it does move on to the last stanza. It's great how it seems to suggest that life went on after she died. The villain lives while she's long gone and it's very eye-opening. Amazing! I love your work so much! |
by pookiengurgi
Wow that was really good. You did not need to clarify it was rape that had been performed, but its cool u did. Excellent |
by Kellie
Great poem, it is one of my favourites that i have seen on here and it all flows so well. There was only one thing i did not like too much about it and that was the last four lines. I'm not sure why i just think that it would be better if it ended with the second to last paragraph. Other than that i think it is perfect. |
by pookiengurgi
That was outstanding!very sad...yet hopeful right up until the "Angel" committed suicide.great job. |