This one was my first real poem, it has been published, but i couldn't keep it off of hear. i think that it is one of my best poems...

i have no clue as to why you don't have many votes or comments! i love your poems! they're great! this one flows very well and has a really clear message!! 5/5
peace,
ABcede :>)

may i ask what about them you like?

awesome good thinkin loved it 5/5!