by David Keltch Jul 1, 2005
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Jesus gave his life on the cross, |
by kiesha
Great poem. I love it. The only thing is when you said the people who said Jesus died lied - I know it works with your poem, but his earthly form really did die. I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be rude, so I apologize if you're offended. I really did like it, though. Keep up the good work and take care. |
good poem with a great message =) |
you are an awesome writer!! you put that so well!! comin from a christian and a poet you have a good talent!! keep writing!!! |
by David Keltch
I wrote this poem to help witness |