I wrote this poem to help witness

you are an awesome writer!! you put that so well!! comin from a christian and a poet you have a good talent!! keep writing!!!

good poem with a great message =)
blessings, courtie

Great poem. I love it. The only thing is when you said the people who said Jesus died lied - I know it works with your poem, but his earthly form really did die. I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be rude, so I apologize if you're offended. I really did like it, though. Keep up the good work and take care.