This is a GOOD poem!

So much determindation and passion in this poem!! Its beautiful :0) You need to work on love and you can see that and show it in your poem!!
Great write xo

that was a cute poem. 5/5

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aw this poem is so cute .. 5/5 crissie

I LOVE THIS POEM!! This totally makes me think of how i am now with my boyfriend!! and you did so well on writing it!! Keep it up, you are such a good writer!!

this is a really good poem. i write all the time and i havent yet been able to write my emotions/feelings out like that. you just described exactly how im feeling recently. if you dont mind can i copy this down and put it up on my web site ill even give you full credit on it i swear. ill even give you the website addy so you can check when i get it up there... by the way if you can will you please read and comment on my poems please at least some of them!! Thanx, keep writing your good.!
Luv,
*Ashley*,Jason*,Jasley*