Comments : I can’t believe You Will Be Gone

  • 19 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    yepp, I'm gonna miss her too. But she seemed a bit unhappy in our school. I hope she's happier wherever she goes and all. And if you guys are really best friends, you'll make it work out...hopefully. Like try and hang out and stuff. If she's been there for you and you've been there for her...you don't have to stop. Well good luck with your friendship :o) I hope things work out and you guys stay friends.

    See you in September <3

  • 19 years ago

    by Rolo

    Aw, that must be a horrible feeling. I would fall apart if I lost my best friend. It was sweet and sincere...I do think it could flow better but that's just me. Nicely done.

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    Thanks for checking out my poems! It really meant a lot to me...this poem is very nice poem! very good! 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Mel

    i kno just how u feel. except i am the one leaving. its horrible...so i understand the poem. i do think that u forced a few rhymes tho.

    check out mine!! i will return the favor!

    :.:MEL:.:

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    Great poem.. im sorry that clarissa is leaving.. but i am sure u guys will stay in touch and you will definitly make new friends. i know we werent that close this year, but hopefully we can hang out next year or get to know each ohter better. you were really fun to work w/ in math..
    lolz... Good job with the poem

    ~jaMiE~