a few spelling mistakes. other than that its great. needs to be finished as you said though. i love the message. keep up the good work
~*Freak*~

When I read the title, I thought it was another rape poem. You proved me wrong.

Great story, its refreshing and I like it. I used to feel so strong about these kinds of topics.

Take care,
Renee

wooow
loved it
well written and loved the expressions
liked the lines :Its not his fault He lives this way
Its not his fault ....
good work gurl
keep it up
Bye Bye
Nema
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Excellnet poem! 5

wow thats a great keep it up

lotta love
wendie